Fields of Spring

i, like so many others, have constantly screamed 'just tell him already!' at my computer screen, but i also remember being 17 & 18 and having similar all-consuming amounts of risk-aversion behaviour. i appreciate how the art direction and writing portrays most of the characters as actual teenagers, much like butterfly soup, and not as popular media stereotypes of teenagers.

i think it would provide a little more clarity to state the era that this narrative takes place in on this itch page, the furtive year of 2003, since it is otherwise very easy to assume that it is taking place right now (twenty some-odd years later). the story itself makes the time-period clear with its references to the technology of the time (dial-up, cd games, broadband, monthly cell-phone minutes), but it might save some confusion for readers to also know the setting's year in the novel's description here. thanks and im looking forward to the next updates!

This is a great vn is it ever gonna continue😭

I need to know what happens next 😭😭😭

I really loved this story it was really good when is it gonna continue for android

Enjoyed this a lot more than I thought I would. Looking forward to see where all these confused teen feelings end up.

Also, I thought it was funny that Cory's sprit reminds me of Ramin Karimloo lol.

I love the art style, I love the characters, and I love the story! I really hope this project isn't cancelled and I look forward to more updates!

Please make a update for android

I'm loving the game, and am very much looking forward to Wednesday.  I'm hopeful for some mutual floor mopping and synchronised shirt ironing.  Hopefully this will be followed by Mikey hanging with Cory whilst Jordan and Guy finish each other off because 2v2 is better than a three-way.

I''ve just finished the latest build and I must say I wasn't expecting things to go that way (well, I was kinda hoping to of course)

The story's really bittersweet (in a good way) because of how Mikey views himself and how closeted he is. I can't say I can relate because I was lucky enough to grow up in a really gay friendly environment and live in a country where it's well accepted (never questioned myself about that either, I just am who I am) so Mikey's story hurts a little I must admit, in all honesty I just want him to get out of the closet asaf and get together with Cory (and I sure hope I will get to see that in the future builds of the game !)

It saddens me to see there are still plenty of people who don't/can't accept their sexuality because of external pressure of the way the others might judge them, and I think this game portrays this suffering really well

Keep up with the good work, I'm looking forward to the next update ! 

(also Rachel and Olivia are best girls, even though I anticipate the moment Rachel's gonna learn the truth about Mikey and gonna get hurt in the process, but "unfortunately" you can't decide who you fall in love with or not)

Great update so far I will finish it later TN.

I'm digging the extreme internal conflict and awkwardness right now with Rachel chasing after the mc but your gay feels like my own highschool life lmao... Midwest America vibes.

Keep the updates coming I'm glad this feels rooted in real life. Rachel and Olivia are refreshing characters and very welcomed in a sea of gay vns with all dudes.

Spoiler opinion below.

Edit* I just finished reading and I loved it!

The only thing I'd critique is I wish their was a bit of dialogue or something after the car scene, I understand the conversation is probably coming later but I think more should have been said in that moment. A simple "I'm sorry I shouldn't have done that" or "I don't know why I did that shit I'm sorry" would have felt right. It just felt like something was missing. Also I'm not sure if it was my settings but some of the transitions when the location/scene changed felt jaring, sometimes I expected more text or something leading into the scene ending but it would just cut to the next scene.

Minor critiques I still loved all of it :)

GRAHHHH  

very minor spoiler

Wish someone can talk to Mikey about the whole Cory situation and give him some insight because I physically cringed (not in a  bad way well maybe a little) on what happened before the  mall, I just want to see Mikey and Cory fulfilled with their lives (*cough cough*) together hopefully-. BUT overall this VN has been a very fun and realistic read with its writing. Yall are amazballz  :)

¿no tienes nada mas que pertubar la mente humana?

This vn is gonna be so good, can't wait for next update

so good

Xour writing invokes such strong emotions :) it always puts me on edge (in both a good and a bad way xD) and immerses me in the story completely :p this update was most DEFINITELY worth the wait~ UwU

Yo, eymon bro, I am READING.

2 builds in and this is shaping up into being something amazing good shit man.

Mike you had one job ..... Talk to the damn fox already 🗿 was expecting him to be talking while drunk but heck no, man has plot armor on drunk resistance 😭

Omg they kissed 🦊🐱💘