The Blue Cloth

Dead game still?

I was not expecting it to be quite that short.

Is there going to be more?  What stories lie on the different paths? 

Hello, eymonart. I like your game very much. I translated it into Chinese. Do you need me to send you a Chinese version?

All and all, I love your story and worldbuilding Eymon!
You rarely tell, and it gets my stupid mind to figure out how this world works, nice job showing. For such a short VN, you don't add any confusing details, which is an achievement. 

I'll love seeing how you improve your writing in your sequel, keep fighting!

Given the fact that you already have done the story from two separate points of view, if you were to make a new installment to expand upon this world, there is a potential of multiple routes that could loop around into each other. Go with Dog, stay and help Dog, then go Cat, then home. Go with Dog, leave Dog for Cat, then home.  Go Cat, then go Dog, then Home. Go Cat, Go Home.  Each choice would impact the intensity or rate of progression, for better or worse, of events.  By the end, assuming all 4 paths chosen, there would be a good deal of more to the world you have made here and it would only set he groundwork for even more.  It would have come full circle enough by then that a third installment may not need to have any of these characters as the main cast, but still acknowledge they exist.  These ideas are not a must, but this seems to be the potential they have.

Damn, this was such a good journey. It was sort of intense on my emotions, even though not much physically happened. Really enjoyed this.

Is there any news on an update?

Heya! I'ts me, Mayday or TheForestVN on Twitter. 

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Ngl when i first opened up the game i thought that there will be no menu music. I know it sounds wrong to think that but i just had a feeling that theres no menu music. When  i started the game i really liked it that you get instantly thrown into the Story. I also really liked that you knew from the beginning who the Main character is in "The Blue Cloth". He is well drawn and you can read his expressions good. (Same goes for every other Character) I also like it that you put a human into the story. Not many vn's have this. 

The Story is well written and i didn't notice a single misspelling. (In my 15 Mins of playtime) You also didnt use the whole time words that were difficult to read. The story was easy to read.

The Backgrounds were also really well drawn. There were no big details. I really liked that, because you can let your mind free thinking what could be there. (Hope you get what i mean)

I also really liked the music. I don't know if you made the music by yourself or got it from the internet but it was well choosen/made. It did fit in perfectly. 

I will give this vn a 90/100.

Its just a 90 because from what i read it's a really short story. I also skipped everything at first by using the skip button and it didnt take long to get to the end.

Everything else was perfect. Ngl i think you would be amazing at making a really long Furry VN. I can also imagine that you could create a really good horror or romance VN. 

You really need to make a longer VN. 

Welp thats everything for now. MayDay is out! 

See ya!

Btw its 2.36am for me...

Loving it so far, cant wait to see where it goes! (Is there a bear in the background of the CG with Kal?) Also btw, it would be useful to have a version number for each update, makes it easier to check if the game has been updated for those who don't keep track of the dev logs

Liking this gem in the rough. Have you considered adding an option to either being able to see Nsfw content or to keep it censored in the option menu? Some VN's add it and it works well. That way the player has both options available if they desire to play either way.

This one was pretty damn good! The worldbuilding was really interesting, the characters, dialogue, and internal conflicts were well done, and I'm excited to see where this goes. The music was also incredible, I loved every track in this game and they all fit the mood they were going for perfectly. Although, I do feel like that last scene we got could use a little bit of a touch up, I feel like Levis was pretty chipper and we don't see much of any internal strife, considering his circumstances. Otherwise, a really solid VN experience that I quite enjoyed!

Looks promising!! can't wait for future updates!!

Will there be Android

i like this vn but it's really sad it's so short just hoping for it have some update sometime with a more longer story and still a good vn